In addition to the tree and sunset

no action, description is meaningless. So after a bunch of your readers Naixiang detailed description, you want to change the story will be suspended. The story of

your readers, attracted by the ongoing story, rather than on the fine prose. So to say, your story do not need any description of it? Of course not. Description to be

used carefully, said to be a little bit, so your readers can see, hear, and feel your story in the world. But please do note, "a description is to be released once a

little bit" and not fall into one of the major pages thrown out. I am definitely not the first warning, the "poetic" description of people who make the story come to a

halt, but the question will appear again and again new to the article. Repeated, there are two reasons for this, or is unaware of the nature of the novel, or is out of

love my write something, and let the pride override his mind. "Fine writing" often will slow the pace of the story, and have caused the gap between reader and story.

Please do note that, in addition to the tree and sunset, the description also includes the "role of the mind and thoughts." Novices often only leaving in order to

describe the role of the heart of the story to a halt. Of course, you have to enter your character is head and heart, while some view you have to be revealed to the

reader to know, so that readers can understand him, and sympathize with him and share his behavior. But in a good novel, even the novel, describes the role of the

length of the heart and emotions are often very short. A competent writer will say that (description) is not much, and expression (action) a lot. Now readers will want

you to push the story, rather than discuss things stand. So you can think about your novel "communication system." There are many ways to the information to be

transmitted to the reader. Different methods can produce different story rhythm: 1. Expose (exposition): Zhe Shirang story slowest pace of change means, directly to

the intelligence, nothing happens, you just give readers information, such as autobiographical background, height and weight, social status and other information. Some

data must be readers, but when your data in to the encyclopedia, the story is not any progress.

2. Description (des.cription): same as slow down the rhythm, some are necessary, should be used carefully.